I loved the language you used, and how Jack recognizes the 'butterfly' for what it is instantly.
Nice touch with the werewolf, and all the small details (the restaurant messing up Gwen's order every time, Ianto's wool sweater) really made the whole story very rich.
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Date: 2008-08-07 03:06 am (UTC)I loved the language you used, and how Jack recognizes the 'butterfly' for what it is instantly.
Nice touch with the werewolf, and all the small details (the restaurant messing up Gwen's order every time, Ianto's wool sweater) really made the whole story very rich.